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By Julieta Sevilla

I went to your room
With flowers in my hand
Sneaking to surprise you
I’m excited myself too

But your room was bare
Your closet was empty
Only the smell of your perfume
And a small piece of note

I stand still, numbness all over
Tears start to roll down
This can’t be real

I don’t even have the strength
To read what’s on the note
I saw this happening
I just didn’t expect this soon

‘Thanks, sorry and goodbye’
Is all that you wrote
This can’t be true
You left me all alone

So much pain in my heart
I almost stopped breathing
I was shouting your name
Then I was suddenly awakened.

Thank God! It was just a dream!
I was so happy I jumped with joy
I hurriedly went into your room
But…

Your room was bare
Your closet was empty
Only the smell of your perfume
And a small piece of note…

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  1. who saw was someone under the window looking .
    April 29, 2010
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    this poem is very great .its brought out all what the camera captured and who was on the camera to.was this written monday ..lol.keep on writting the poem is lovely.

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  2. hidden camera
    April 29, 2010
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    great poem.

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  3. depart
    April 28, 2010
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    this poem is so sweet ..enjoy every bit of it .lmao

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  4. lovely
    April 28, 2010
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    great poem.that got be a illegal person.lol

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  5. I really mean it
    April 28, 2010
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    and on the note it said

    “immigration coming”

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  6. Great
    April 28, 2010
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    Lovely Poem ! Keep writing

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  7. wow!
    April 28, 2010
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    wow! Juliet this is wonderful, I love it.

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